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This is like a few sentances --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------ "Stop hurting him! I mean it he will die!'' I remember yelling at those bullies "Oh shut up you little brat he'll be fine I mean he is the strongest death student at this school, right?" I then started crying seeing him like that, who wouldnt cry? ''Hey Oddette I dont want you to see me looking so weak so when I beat them lets forget about this okay?" "Huh? THATS WHAT YOUR WORRIED ABOUT!?". ''Shut up!" *CRACK* It was so quiet after that I remember the bullies just running off while I just stood there, when I snapped out of it I ran over to him, he told me he couldnt move and sent me to get the schools healer's but when we came back we was gone. But in the puddle of blood there was a note

"I will get my medics to take good care of him, I promise you he will be fine. Im in need of a new prodige and he's perfect. Dont worry about him he'll have a better life here you know it. Well I must go now.

-Death Lord Odearn
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Do you like it? Give me your feedback this is just a preview of the first chapter cuz I had to  restart it I lost EVERY thing I had on my laptop any who hope you like the preview/picture .Bia.